Saturday, 30 March 2013

Saturday Spankings #SatSpanks - FREE spanking book for YOU!


Another glorious Saturday and another super spanking!! This week myself and fellow author Natalie Dae are offering you a FREE spanking story available at Amazon as ebook. (Natalie and I write together a lot, check out our other work.)

The story is called MORE and is written in the second person  point of view, not our usual style but for this type of piece it works very well. The narrative makes it personal, intimate, there's a certain voyuer feel to it and also a sense of having got into the character's heads.

Our heroine wants to try spanking and she's finally plucked up the courage to ask for it. This is a peek into the couple's bedroom as they explore this new side of their relationship. It's hot and dirty and gets straight to the point.



Here are the first 8 lines...

Don’t just slap me once, it’s not enough. I want more. I want you to strike my ass, your fingertips just brushing my cunt lips, and I want you to do it again and again. I heard a woman can come just from being slapped like that. Don’t you want to try it? Don’t you want to see if it works? Don’t you want to know that you can get me off just by those delicious hits?
I’ll get on my hands and knees for you, and you can stand beside the bed, the perfect position...



Tickled your fancy? Then here are the grab it FREE links (29th March - 3rd April)Tell all your friends and please LIKE the product page on Amazon and our Facebook page. Also at the end of the short story you'll find bonus chapters to sample our other novels and see if they press your  naughty buttons!





Look out for HARD, coming soon.




Thanks so much for dropping by, leave me a comment and say hi.

Lily x



15 comments:

  1. At least the lady knows what she wants and how to ask for it. Very tempting excerpt, Lily.

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  2. Writing in second person gives a piece a different voice. It creates an intimacy with the reader, almost makes the reader a part of the story.

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    1. I totally agree, Cara. I don't think I could write a whole novel this way but for a short it's good fun.

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  3. Intriguing! So few books are written in 2nd person POV - it really changes the way a person reads.

    This book is in my tbr pile:)

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  4. Aw! You've got to love that very first time. Fond memories!

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  5. Oh, thanks to all you Sat Spank followers who have commented - I love hearing your thoughts :-)

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  6. Yes, I feel for her. Gotta love the first time. Downloaded the book.

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  7. Thanks for the freebie, Lily. Adding to TBR pile. Can't wait to delve into it. :)

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  8. I like this snippet, my dear! I makes me squeeze my legs together and look for more.

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